What an excellent read. I agree with you 100%, ir is all in where you put the comma. I like the example you gave, as you wrote:

Let’s eat grandma.

Let’s eat, grandma.

I have my own rhythm, when I write a poem. Where I try to follow correct grammer, I also bend it sometimes, to make my words fit the rhythm.

I do wish Medium had a "spell-checker", I have found myself getting too used to it in word.

By the way, I am a new writer in Medium. I would appreciate it if you would read a poem or two of mine. Then again, I only have about two or hree poems listed..

Thank you in advance

AL. Newman

Wire Editor Newman

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