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WOW, That was good, I really enjoyed your poem. I laughed a bit, because I believe we have all been there. You helped explain overdraft in an ubeat kind of story. In other words, What I took from the poem was, It's Ok, We have all been here ourselves, and it is not the worst thing that can happen, It will get better soon.

I loved the flow of the poem also.

Great job Sir,

Al, a/k/a/ Wire,

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Wire Editor Newman
Wire Editor Newman

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Writer of, Humor, Poetry, Life, Love, Fiction, Automobiles and the Blues. / Writing in Medium.com / https://medium.com/refresh-the-soul

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